BREAKING DOWN DRAWN IN LOVE

 Danny's Poem is a clear masterpiece. He trully can make every soul to fall in love to some extent. However, not everyone who reads the poem first cut will be able to understand the romance behind this beautiful poem. Therefore, allow me to break the poem step by step and see if we can unlock the hidden treasure behind the poem 

DRAWN IN LOVE

  

True love is scarce.

Yet, she has been writing us letters

On a silver stone saying something so precious,

Crowning us Romeo and Juliet, William must meet us. 

                              

Take my heart, yours I will remain with here.

Feel my heartbeat in yours against doubts and fear

As love speaks to our soul a language so sincere

Love makes us blind to make us see even more clear.


whisper to me on the ear piece of my phone

Send sweet sounds, speak in an angelic tone.

Activate my emotions make me silently mourn.

Make me madly miss you every time am alone.


Connect the waves of passion to my soul.

Respond to my magical touch and call

I can feel you feeling me, especially my heart particle.

Undress my pride let my tears fall


If its not me knocking please keep the doors shut

They are "koswe mupoto" only after your groundnut!

But I have promised from the start

I will resign loving you when the bucket kicks me sweetheart.


Say my name in your dreams

Be drunk in these love streams

Sit on the laps of fantasy, life is more beautiful than it seems

Let's fly on the wings of ecstasy to the extremes...

POEM MEANING AND EXPLANATION

  

True love is scarce.

Yet, she has been writing us letters

On a silver stone saying something so precious,



Even though true love is hard to find, Danny believes there is a sort of communication that is sparkled up wherever he is with his lover. The symbolic “silver stone” means there is light, therefore there love is pure. 




Crowning us Romeo and Juliet, William must meet us.       


                    

Who doesn’t know the history of the greatest lovers, Romeo and Juliet??? And honestly William Shakespeare has to meet these young lovers and write stories and songs about them!!!!




Take my heart, yours I will remain with here.

Feel my heartbeat in yours against doubts and fear

As love speaks to our soul a language so sincere



The heart is the Centre of every living human being, and you can only give it away to someone you truly trust and believe that they will keep it safe instead of playing around with it. Danny is assuring his lover of trust, and wants her to look beyond humanly fears and reciprocate the same trust he is giving her




Love makes us blind to make us see even more clearly.



Love should make us blind enough to see other people apart from our lovers. I agree this makes US see our loved ones more clearly coz we are not paying any attention to other people. 




Whisper to me on the ear piece of my phone

Send sweet sounds, speak in an angelic tone.

Activate my emotions make me silently mourn.

Make me madly miss you every time am alone.



In modern world, the phone really makes up so much for distance. We love to hear our loved ones speak to us on phone, or send us voice/video messages via social media each time they are far from us. This makes us miss them even more coz we only get a part of them. 




Connect the waves of passion to my soul.

Respond to my magical touch and call

I can feel you feeling me, especially my heart particle.

Undress my pride let my tears fall



When we love someone, we suddenly start to feel connected. It’s like we are suddenly becoming complete, our lover feels like the missing piece of our live and now they are just falling in place. The worst part is we expect these lovers to react in a certain way that will keep us CRAVING for them more and more…For love, a man would do anything, EVEN CRY!!!!




If it’s not me knocking please keep the doors shut

They are "koswe mumpoto" only after your groundnut!



Danny emphasises to his lover that she must not open her heart to any other man. He is enough for her.  Most of the “other” guys are only rats who want to steal sex from her.




But I have promised from the start

I will resign loving you when the bucket kicks me sweetheart.



People kick buckets, not buckets kicking people. Danny Says he will keep loving his lady even in death!!! The reverse statement “when the bucket kicks me” means death will have to try and stop him from loving his mistress!!!! Amazing, isn’t it?




Say my name in your dreams



Do you dream about me? Coz I always do. Whether is a lie or not. Every set of lovers will talk about dreams, but in this scenario, Danny might be asking his lady to include him in her future goals




Be drunk in these love streams



Danny’s love for his mistress keeps flowing like a river…. It is UNCONDITIONAL




Sit on the laps of fantasy, life is more beautiful than it seems

Let's fly on the wings of ecstasy to the extremes...


He decides to end the poem with a very important aspect of every relationship. He says there love is limitless; they can keep making it exciting every day. He wants to take his lover of a trip of romantic adventure in the world of imagination!!!!!

REVIEW AND RATING

We honestly think the Poem is the greatest so far that Danny has written. The imagination is beyond, the mood is on point  and we would like to have an audio version of this poem


If we wre to rate this poem out of 10, we would give it 8